How I Got a Full Scholarship to ALU — My Application Journey
I applied twice. The first time I received a grant. The second time I got the scholarship. Here is the full story — what I did differently, what I learned, and what I would tell anyone applying today.
Getting into African Leadership University on a full Mastercard Foundation Scholarship did not happen on the first try. I applied twice. The first application got me a grant — recognition, but not the full scholarship. The second time, I got it. This is the honest story of both attempts, what changed, and what I would tell anyone sitting where I was.
Why ALU
I grew up in South Sudan, a country where access to quality higher education is limited and opportunities are scarce. I had always known I wanted to study technology — not just to get a degree, but to build things that could actually change something in my community. When I first heard about African Leadership University, what stood out was not just the curriculum. It was the mission: to develop a new generation of African leaders who solve African problems.
That resonated with me deeply. I was not looking for a university that would teach me to leave Africa. I was looking for one that would equip me to stay and build.
The First Application — A Grant, Not the Scholarship
My first application was genuine but incomplete in ways I did not fully understand at the time. I wrote about my ambitions. I talked about wanting to study software engineering. I described my community work in broad strokes. The essays were honest, but they were not specific enough. I was telling ALU what I wanted to do without showing them who I already was.
The first application got me a grant — partial financial support. It was meaningful recognition, but it was not the full Mastercard Foundation Scholarship. I took it as a signal: the potential was there, but the story was not fully told yet.
I spent time reflecting on what the reviewers might have seen. I realised I had written about aspirations without grounding them in evidence. I had not connected my past experiences — teaching, community work, student leadership — to a clear and specific vision for what I would do with an ALU education.
What I Did Differently the Second Time
The second application was built on three things I had learned from the first.
- Specificity over ambition. Instead of saying I wanted to "use technology to help Africa," I described a specific problem I had seen — students in my community losing access to learning because there was no digital infrastructure — and explained exactly what I planned to build to address it.
- Evidence over claims. I stopped saying I was a leader and started showing it. I described the student government work in concrete terms: the number of students I represented, the specific policy changes I pushed for, the outcomes that resulted.
- Honesty about the journey. I mentioned the first application and what I had learned from it. I did not hide the fact that I had applied before. I framed it as part of my growth — someone who takes feedback seriously and comes back stronger.
The Essays That Mattered Most
The Mastercard Foundation Scholarship application asks you to demonstrate leadership, community impact, and a clear vision for how you will use your education. The essays that made the difference for me were the ones where I stopped trying to sound impressive and started trying to be clear.
One essay asked about a challenge I had overcome. I wrote about the experience of teaching at a primary school in South Sudan while preparing my own university applications — managing a classroom of young students during the day and studying for entrance requirements at night. I did not dramatise it. I described it plainly and focused on what it taught me about discipline, patience, and the value of education.
"One minute on a book does not lie." — Noble Arem Riak A quote that shaped how I approached every hour of preparation
That quote had been with me since secondary school. I included it in my application because it was genuinely part of how I thought about effort. Reviewers can tell when something is authentic versus when it is performed.
The Wait and the Result
The waiting period after submitting the second application was difficult. I had put everything I had into it. I had been more vulnerable and more specific than I had ever been in a formal application. There was nothing left to do but wait.
When the acceptance came — with the full Mastercard Foundation Scholarship — it did not feel like luck. It felt like the result of two years of preparation, one failed attempt, and a decision to be honest about who I was and what I was trying to build.
What I Would Tell Anyone Applying
- Apply even if you are not sure you are ready. The first application taught me more about myself than any preparation course could have.
- Be specific about the problem you want to solve. Vague ambition is forgettable. A clear problem with a clear plan is memorable.
- Show your work, not just your goals. What have you already done? What did it teach you? That evidence matters more than promises.
- If you apply and do not get it, apply again. The second application is always stronger than the first if you take the feedback seriously.
- Write like yourself. The reviewers read hundreds of applications. The ones that stand out are the ones that sound like a real person, not a template.
Where I Am Now
I am currently in my first year of Software Engineering at ALU, Kigali. The scholarship covers everything — tuition, accommodation, and living expenses. More importantly, it placed me in an environment where the expectation is not just to learn, but to lead and to build.
I am working on projects that connect directly to the problems I described in my application. The healthcare discovery platform, the digital literacy work, the community impact — these are not separate from my studies. They are the reason I am here.
If you are reading this from South Sudan, or from anywhere in Africa where the path to quality education feels uncertain — the path exists. It is harder for some of us than others. But it exists. Apply. Apply again if you need to. Tell your real story.